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Sunday, September 28, 2014

Word Smithing Poem

Sometimes it's easy.

Sometimes it's hard.

Changing crappy sentences into gold.


"Even though it had only been minutes this time, most were already drifting off back to sleep again."


"Though it had been only minutes, most were drifting back to sleep."

But that's what I'm doing.

The next twenty days.

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